I thought you did a great job with your elevator pitch, You provided awesome information and were well-spoken throughout. In addition, you dressed for the part of a pitching CEO. In class, I believe it was discussed that we should avoid introducing your name/position, but I did not really feel that your intro detracted from the pitch. If I were to offer some pieces of advice, they would be... see if you can add a convincing hook and attempt to more exaggerate your passion for your idea. Great work and great blog name!
Check out my elevator pitch at: https://entrepreneurship0720.blogspot.com/2019/09/10a-elevator-pitch-no-1.html
Hi there Brooke! I think this was a really great elevator pitch. I enjoyed watching it because you are very informative, yet also you know how to keep the attention of the listener. You dressed very professionally as well which I think adds somewhat to a person's credibility when giving an elevator pitch. Overall very nice job Brooke!
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ReplyDeleteI thought you did a great job with your elevator pitch, You provided awesome information and were well-spoken throughout. In addition, you dressed for the part of a pitching CEO. In class, I believe it was discussed that we should avoid introducing your name/position, but I did not really feel that your intro detracted from the pitch. If I were to offer some pieces of advice, they would be... see if you can add a convincing hook and attempt to more exaggerate your passion for your idea. Great work and great blog name!
Check out my elevator pitch at: https://entrepreneurship0720.blogspot.com/2019/09/10a-elevator-pitch-no-1.html
Hi there Brooke! I think this was a really great elevator pitch. I enjoyed watching it because you are very informative, yet also you know how to keep the attention of the listener. You dressed very professionally as well which I think adds somewhat to a person's credibility when giving an elevator pitch. Overall very nice job Brooke!
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